Alyss Heart

I would also suggest a more structured form. I would also put a period at the end instead of the last word. I would suggest also that you keep rhythm ...

flashing across solar system’s planes we venture to the end of expansion bones bending atoms shifting from the molecular norm two bodies stretch to a state of elasticity- minds turn ...

I really liked the length of the poem. Shortness is a bit unusual around here, but I like it. I agree with the previous about there being a hige information ...